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That Punk Rock Feeling by ~NecromantikMoon:iconNecromantikMoon:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


She walks down the street,
Headphones in her ears.
Angry music playing loudly,
To keep away her tears.
Her hair is short and messy,
Her black polish is chipped.
Her combat boots thump loudly,
Her goodwill jeans are ripped.
She likes her rough fashion,
Ahough she hates her face.
It masks her emotions,
Her hearts delicate as lace.
Yet she grins at passersby,
Who stare with pure disgust.
She leaves them speechless,
Coverde in her dust.
©2006-2010 ~NecromantikMoon
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Author's Comments

a teenage grunge punk

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~frankienexus Apr 4, 2006, 8:40:38 AM
this is a great capture i can feel the laugh and the stregnth of her also that underneath there is something vunerable

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~literatureODD Sep 3, 2006, 9:02:40 AM
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=SeductiveByatch Sep 4, 2006, 10:39:25 PM
This reminds me of many of the girls I see walking home from the High School down the street.

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~xXminceXx Sep 5, 2006, 3:25:23 PM
Gotta love those girls. :)

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:iconnecromantikmoon:
~NecromantikMoon Sep 5, 2006, 5:27:21 PM
agreed.

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It is a tale told by an idiot. Full of sound and fury. Signifying Nothing.
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~NecromantikMoon Sep 5, 2006, 5:28:43 PM
Yea, a lotta people like that I think.

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It is a tale told by an idiot. Full of sound and fury. Signifying Nothing.
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!Punk-Ass Oct 2, 2006, 11:19:38 AM
ohh yes i know what its like to be in that situation ^^ i get stared at like a freak for the way i dress every day just makes me laugh

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:iconnecromantikmoon:
~NecromantikMoon Apr 4, 2007, 9:05:51 PM
lol
it happens
stupid people do stupid things

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It is a tale told by an idiot. Full of sound and fury. Signifying Nothing.
:iconroadkill37:
~Roadkill37 Jul 3, 2007, 6:03:12 AM
Wow. This is great!

I totally get that feeling every day. :+favlove:

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~PunkDragon Aug 1, 2007, 6:27:58 AM
wow.. i love it. and so true.

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Kaz -- Music is my life

"You're only as strong as the tables you dance on, the drinks you mix, and the friends you rock with"
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